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Aug. 29th, 2007 @ 06:05 pm Fic Update: Absolution (Dumbledore)
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Current Music: Accio Love--Ministry of Magic w/ The Moaning Myrtles
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From:snorkackcatcher
Date:August 30th, 2007 11:47 pm (UTC)
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Oh, that's terrific -- some great insights I hadn't thought of, such as Sirius' attitude, and Dumbledore's reaction to Harry. And the scene with the ring fighting back with the figures of Ariana and Harry was a really good idea. The second-person style works excellently here.
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From:reverdybrune
Date:August 30th, 2007 11:59 pm (UTC)
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Thank you so much! :D

This started out in third-person, but it just didn't work. I'm glad you liked the second-person. I'd never used it before.